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Philip_Kippel 23:32:01 Tue Mar 16 2004 Offline 1099 posts Supreme Member Reply |
Can't wait. | ||||||
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Rufus3000 20:31:21 Wed Mar 17 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now:  Post Mood:  Reply |
Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.
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Rufus3000 21:56:24 Wed Mar 17 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
Plus, Once again, I got a new email, and it's not a shippy story. Heck, Kim and Ron aren't even near each other. They hate each other. They do become friends again, but JUST friends. Not anything more.
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Rufus3000 22:16:15 Wed Mar 17 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
Chapter 11: Ron Nonbeliever
Ron: DAMN! This was the 10th time Ron tried to open his locker, but he failed. Kim: Uh Ron... I want to talk to you about something. Ron ignored her. Kim: Ron. Didn't you hear me? I said I want to talk to you about something. Ron: Oh... about you NOT wanting me in your life? Kim: Yeah, about that. Ron, I've been thinking, and I am truly sorry about that. I was just, well... Ron: You were... Kim: Je... RIIIIIING! Ron: Whoops. Don't want to be late for class. But thank god that was the warning bell. You were... Kim: Jea... Zita: Hey Ron. Ron: Hey Zita. Zita: Are we still going ot the dance tonight? Ron: You bet. Zita walked away with an evil smirk. Ron: Dang, I love her... So, what were you saying? Kim: Ron, there's something you should know. Zita doesn't really love you. Ron: WHAT?! Kim: It's true. Zita is only dating you because you were good at Everlot. Ron: Ph... yeah right. Kim: I'm not kidding! Ron, she is using you. Ron: Yeah right. Kim: I can prove it. Ron: Bullshit. Now I don't want you in my life. Kim: What for? Ron: All the times you hurt me... Kim: Like when? Ron: I saved your life by getting that flower, but you were too busy with Josh. The next day, you didn't sit with me at lunch. Lastly, I almost died when Drakken kidnapped me and tried to cut me in half. but you didn't come at all. If that what's a best friend does, maybe we shouldn't be best friend. Kim: Ron... I don't want it to end up like it did yesterday. Ron: Whatever. I'm leaving. Hope you die, because Zita and I already are fine without you. Kim: But Ron, I l... Ron: Seeya. Ron walked off to his first class. Kim: ...ove you. Kim walked down the hall. Justine: HEY KIM! Kim: Not now Justine. Justine: Let me guess. You and Ron broke up so he is going out with Zita and you want him back so you work with Drakken and Monique to try to make Ron love you but it's not working. Kim: How did you find all that out. You only came back yesterday from vacation. Justine: Rumors... no duh. Kim: Yeah, right... any suggestions? I'm desperate. Justine: You need to express how you feel. Kim: Like that'll... wait... the dance tonight... hm... I am supposed to sing tonight... maybe I will perform. Thanks Justine. And how did you get so nice. Justine: Monique taught me. Kim: Oh.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Next Chapter will be up soon. | ||||
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Matt324324 00:53:29 Thu Mar 18 2004 Offline 52 posts Member  Reply |
(Screams like Charlie Brown) When will it all end?!!!!
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Rufus3000 01:45:50 Thu Mar 18 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
Very soon. There are only 3 chapters left.
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Philip_Kippel 15:44:42 Sun Mar 21 2004 Offline 1099 posts Supreme Member Reply |
Let's see the next chapter, please.
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Rufus3000 19:12:59 Sun Mar 21 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood:  Reply |
It's being edited as we speak.
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Philip_Kippel 05:59:23 Mon Mar 29 2004 Offline 1099 posts Supreme Member Reply |
Where IS the next chapter?
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Rufus3000 18:26:31 Mon Mar 29 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
Sorry. Trying to look for the "full" lyrics of Losing Grip. I checked most sights, and they only post like half the song.
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Rufus3000 01:02:58 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood:  Reply |
Philip pm-ed me the lyrics, so here's the next Chapter.
Chapter 12: Losing Grip Monique: Girl, why aren't you dancing? Kim: I... don't... have... a date. Monique: It'll be okay. Ron's acting like a fucket now. He's not really respecting. Kim: Your right. Kim gave Monique a best friend hug. DJ: Kim Possible... you're up. Kim walked up the stage and to the microphone. Kim: I want to point this song out to Ron Stoppable. Ron: Wha? The music started... Kim singing: Are you aware of what you make me feel, baby? Right now I feel invisible to you, like I'm not real Didn't you feel my lock my arms around you? Why'd you turn away? Here's what I got to say I was left to cry there Waitin' outside there Grinnin' with a lost stare That's when I decided Why should I care Cuz you were'nt there When I was scared I was so alone You, you need to listen I'm startin to trip I'm losin my grip And I'm in this thing alone Am I just some chick placed beside you? To take somebody's place When you turn around Can you recognize my face You used to love me You used to hug me But that wasn't the case Everything wasn't okay I was left to cry there Waitin' outside there Grinnin' with a lost stare That's when I decided Why should I care Cuz you weren't there, when I was scared I was so alone You, you need to listen I'm startin' to trip I'm losin' my grip And I'm in this thing alone Cryin out loud I'm cryin out loud Cryin out loud I'm cryin out loud Open your eyes Open up wide Why should I care 'Cuz you weren't there when I was scared I was so alone Why should I care 'Cuz you weren't there when I was scared I was so alone Why should I care If you don't care the I don't care then I don't care We're not goin' anywhere Why should I care 'Cuz you weren't there when I was scared I was so alone Why should I care If you don't care then I don't care We're not goin' anywhere The audience applauded, but Ron had that "guiltyness" in him. Kim left the building, but someone with a gun in the dark ally shot her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There you go. | ||||
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Philip_Kippel 01:09:54 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 1099 posts Supreme Member Reply |
What? Kim was shot?!
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FilKiFan  01:23:53 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 1767 posts Administrator Geek Around Town  Mood Now:  Post Mood:  Reply |
Nice chapter, but you should be more dramatic with the "shot" part.
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Rufus3000 01:40:30 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
I actually stink at drama. Sorry.
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Philip_Kippel 01:46:47 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 1099 posts Supreme Member Reply |
Please post the next chapters soon. I want to read how the story ends now.
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Rufus3000 02:04:36 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
Actually, there is 2 more chapters.
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Philip_Kippel 02:05:56 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 1099 posts Supreme Member Reply |
When will they be posted?
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Chronic_Girl 02:09:25 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 565 posts Advanced Member  Mood Now:  Post Mood:  Reply |
for the shooting of kim part, add something like,
quickly after she finished the song, Kim left the stage, and headed for the exit. it was getting dark, so she quickened her pace down the street. as she passed an ally, she looked up in time to see the shadow of a figure. as soon as kim looked up, she heard a loud shot, then everything went dark... DUN DUN DDDUUUUNNNN!! yeah, i suck, and i said "quick" like a gazillion times in that (really, just twice...), but that's the best i can do. oh yeah, and kim says "your right" when it should be "you're right." that just kind of stuck out for me. 
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Rufus3000 02:12:07 Wed Mar 31 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
I think the next chapter will be up by Sat.
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Rufus3000 00:36:57 Thu Apr 1 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
Chapter 13: Winning Kim
Kim could hear only a beeping sound. She opened her eyes, and everything was so blury. When she could finally see, she was like surprised to herslef in a hospital. Kim: What am I doing here? Nurse: You were shot. Kim: I was... Nurse: Yeah, and you have a guest. Kim: Who? Nurse: Ron Stoppable. Kim: Forget it. Nurse: But he says it's important. Kim: Fine. Ron walked in with tears going down his face. Kim: Ron... what happened? Ron: I don't want to talk about it... Kim:Come on... Kim pulled Ron's arm gently from underneath his shirt. Kim: Ron... why are there wraps around your arm. Ron: Look... after you got shot last night, I broke up with Zita, and my.. uh... Kim: What? Ron: My... well... dad died. Kim: What?! Ron: Before I left, I told him that I hated him because he hated Zita, so... he was walking down... the... uh... Kim: What? Ron: I'll tell you later. Anyways, I felt so guilty, I cut my arm open... Kim: Why would you do something so stupid? Ron: It was an accident. I felt like I deserved it... so I cut it bigger and I fainted... Kim: Ron! That was the dumbest thing you have ever done! Ron: And I wouldn't have done it if I dated that bastard Zita. i'm so sorry Kim. I love you so much... Kim: Ron, for crying out loud. At 1 time we're dating, and 1 time later, your cutting your arm open. You think I'll take you back just like that? Ron: Please Kim... give me a chance... I would take that all back to be in love with you again. Kim: Well... Ron: Well what...? Kim kissed Ron's cheek. Kim: I forgive you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The happy kissy kissy poo poo chapter is coming tom. night. | ||||
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Rufus3000 23:33:29 Thu Apr 1 2004 Offline 7 posts Newbie Mood Now: Post Mood: Reply |
Like I promise. Here is the coclusion of LiS! Chapter is short.
Chapter 14: Happy Ending Kim Possible looked at Christy. Kim: Anything good on the television? Christy: No, which sucks. Ron: I'm home! Kim kissed Ron on the lips. Kim: How was work? Ron: Boring... as usual... But I'm sorry I'm late from work... Kim: Don't tell me... show me... Kim replaced her lips on Ron and locked 'em. ~~Now let's see the villians ending.~~ Drakken was thrown in jail for life for murdering, Shego and Monkey got married, had 3 more children, and lived happily ever after. (That was short. Let's go back to the hero's version) ~~Hero's~~ Kim and Ron had a LONG night of sex, and yet, Kim was pregnent. Kim, Ron, Christy, and Alex (new born) moved from Middleton to somewhere tropical. Every night, Kim and Ron's love got stronger and stronger. Yet, people still say that Love is Sweet. ~Finale~ Hope I didn't suck too bad. Oh well. | ||||
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Philip_Kippel 01:15:01 Fri Apr 2 2004 Offline 1099 posts Supreme Member Reply |
Nice ending, but...could you maybe please explain what happened to Zita and Team Go?
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